Gilman glum

what i did well - I think I write my best and did good block letters

what i could do better next time-add more colour.

Maths strategy

Ap news !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

self assessment
what i did well : I think i spoke clearly and didnt rush it.
what i will do better next time

speech

“Yes” I shout as i brush past the line “12-8” we shout.We won in the last minute, what a adrenalin rush.This is 1 of the many reasons why rugby is the best sport in the world. Rugby is very easy to play all you need is a ball and more than 1 person and maybe some trees for a try line.

Rugby is an awesome sport. Over 120 countries play in the world and more than half are good at it. Rugby is a very energetic sport. 10 million people play in provincial teams and 1,000 - 2,000 play international. New Zealand is probably the best team in the world. Rugby use to just be for boys but more and more girls are starting to play rugby and just recently the rugby board bought in a women's world cup which New Zealand has won for the 4th time in a row.
You can check out Rugby in 2011 on the 9th of September to 23 of October at the Rugby World Cup the final will be played at 9.00 23 of October in Auckland, Eden park.Even though more people play soccer rugby is the best sport in the world but it if you don't wont to play tackle you could play rugby league rippa or touch.

So if you don't play rugby well you probably will wont to change. Defiantly go to marist though because they are the best club in New Zealand so this is why rugby is the best sport in the world.

what i think i did well- I think that i added most facts and i really enjoyed it
what i will do better next time-i think i wont start over again when i all ready have done one.

Riverdale memories

One of the things that I will never forget will be the time that we got to the quarters in the rippa rugby tournament and then told “unfortunately, you have no girls in your team so you are disqualified” I was really sad about that.But that was the only bad thing that happened at riverdale.There were a heap of cool things that happened to me
.At riverdale a thing that i really like is the Friends i have made they include Philip,,Cealum,Connor and many more without these guys it wouldn’t be the same.
Camp was also very awesome.I especially enjoyed the activities.Another thing that i really enjoyed was Quiddage because we got to buy a heap of yummy food.but the main thing that i have enjoyed is the sports.There has been so many that I have enjoyed they include Rippa rugby, touch, cricket, athletics, cross country, duathalon, and many more.This is why Riverdale is the best.

What I think i did well-i think that i added my all of my favorite things instead of just some.

What i think i did bad-i think that i made it a bit to long and rushed it a bit.

my koru bird

What I think I did well- I liked the way i did the shading and the shape of the bird.

what I will do better next time-I thought that the korus were not as good as i wanted them to be.

Term 4 goals

school goal:
to go from 3b to 3a in my writing.
I know I will achieved this when:
when a get the results from my writing moderation.
to achieve this goal I will need to:
focus,don't get distracted by other people.

home goal:
to get to the semi finals for touch.
I know i will achieved this when:
at the start of december.
to achieve this goal I will need to:
practice,play 110% every game.

What i did well- in my home goal we have a chance to get to the semi final

What i well do better next time-next time i will focus more on my writiing

maths presentation

I think I should of added more colour

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Writing

The opening sentence should capture the reader’s interest. It should set the mood of the story, Introduce the situation and / or character /s

Ways of doing this: Dialogue, A Statement, Problem, Action, Description of people, Place or time, Question.

Starting sentences:
1.(time) As soon as the clock struck 1 the windows smashed and the house shook violently.
2.(place)It was a dark overcast day in Paris.
3.(dialogue)'Hands in the air where i can see them !" shouted the angry police man.
4.(statement)The spy was a pro but he had no chance against the u.s army.
5.(action)suddenly a poor old man was shocked so bad he fainted as the twin towers smashed together.
6.(question)'whats happening the house is moving fast"!
7.(problem)with 2 minutes to go Australia scored a goal against New Zealand to make the score 3-2
8.(DOP)suddenly I fall back, as soon as I get up, I look up and I see a huge hole in my leg.





































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I think I did really well because I improved from last year.

Alec and tianau (1)

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i think i did well and did not rush my kiwi but i rushed my backround.

lc12s natural phenomena

https://sites.google.com/site/qmanawatu/home/natural-phenomena

self assessment-what i did well we used good bold colours and we used cool facts off our mind mieasters.
what did i learn-facts about earthquakes
what could i do better next time-spread my facts out and use more slides

handwritting sample

self assessment
what i did well-i didn't rush and i took my time
what i learnt-nothing
what i could to better-use more bold colours

Alecs writting recorded

work goal comment and home goal comment

i have got better at it but i need to work more on it in the next time

alecs writting

handwritting sample

how my brain works

What helps me learn?
Music because it helps me relax and I like music.
Having my sister not around because she can get annoying.
Sitting in front of the TV because you get a bonus when you are done.
Having food around so you don’t get hungry.
If you do it on the computer so if you spell something wrong it will makes it right.

tearm goals

Term goals
Work goals
to make my writing more interesting that it makes a picture in the readers mind.
Home goals
To do well in the b team for cricket and get another trophy for my rugby.